“Ladies and gentlemen, this is your captain speaking. We are experiencing turbulence and ask that you remain in your seats with your seat belts fastened.” AJ spoke the familiar words with practiced calm, but this time things were different. Flicking switches and adjusting controls on deck, he panicked when he noticed cabin pressure fluctuating, red lights flashing dire warnings. His heart rate quickened, echoing the knocks he could hear through the layers of steel. His hands unsteady as he made futile adjustments. Hyperventilating, his thoughts drifted to a regatta 30 years earlier, his hand in his dad’s, secure in their warmth and strength as he looked up to the dance of four planes, leaving a fleeting trail in their wake. They were coloured brightly, vivid blues, reds and yellows. He’d wanted to be a pilot since that day, vowing to make his father proud, to soar with invincibility through the sky, but he was always brought down to earth, reminded of his failings. A lifetime of regrets came into the focus of his mind’s eye with every tumble his plane took, hurtling toward its finale, without the grace and beauty of the stunt planes at the regatta.
Write approximately 200 words based on image of 4 planes doing stunts and maneuvers, leaving a trail of condensate through the sky. Prompt from Sunday Photo Fiction.
I like this. Plummeting out of control and to a grisly end, his life flashing before his eyes.
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Thanks Al, and thanks also for the prompt : )
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Those last few minutes/seconds must be awful.
Cleverly described.
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Thanks! Yes, it would be awful- best reason to live with no regrets in the present for as long as the present lasts.
Apropos of nothing, I used to live in Manchester, close to your neck of the woods : )
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Interesting thoughts here in this well written prompt reply. Lessons to be learned for sure, even in one’s dying moments.
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Thanks Pat!
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